Practice 12. Problem/solution paragraph: "bullying"

BULLYING 

Brainstorming: clustering method

OUTLINE 1st paragraph:

Definition: Bullying is the abuse to someone vulnerable by some other person that thinks that is more powerful. 

Topic sentence: Bullying nowadays can be found in every context of the society.

Supporting sentences: definition, types and where we can find bullying situations.

Concluding sentence: This problem must be solved in the right moment it first happens to make the victim feel better about himself.

Bullying nowadays can be found in every context of the society. Bullying is the abuse to someone vulnerable by some other person that thinks that is more powerful. There three types of bullying that I will explain below. Cyber bullying is the use of electronic communication, such as social media, to bully a person, typically by sending messages of an intimidating or threatening nature. Physical bullying is one of the most obvious form of bullying. It occurs when kids use physical actions, such as kicking, hitting, punching or slapping, to gain power and control over others. Verbal bullying is often quite difficult to identify because attacks usually occur when adults aren’t around. Bully use words, statements, and name-calling to gain power and control over others. We can find all these types at school, at college, at workplace, and on social media. This problem must be solved in the right moment it first happens to make the victim feel better about himself.

Brainstorming: clustering method

OUTLINE 2nd paragraph:

Topic sentence: Bullying is a very dangerous problem in our society that must be solved as fast as we can.

Supporting sentences: tips to solve it and how avoid it.

Concluding sentence: Educating in schools about bullying would avoid so many suicides, anxiety, or bad actions against the victim's life.

Bullying is a very dangerous problem in our society that must be solved as fast as we can. Since we are children we must be educated to respect other people and to accept what they are. We can't influence in other people's personalities by bullying them because that person could end up suicide. At home we must me showed how to respect, but this also has to be shown at schools, where it more occurs. If you see a bullying case, you must call your teachers or director as fast as you can, if we are at school; if you are at home, you should call your parents to solve it. We can't let people laugh at other's personalities, way of dressing or their bodies. That is why we, as a society, must be guided about this unsafe actions. Educating in schools about bullying would avoid so many suicides, anxiety, or bad actions against the victim's life.