Practice 13. How to write a strong thesis statement

Government surveillance

Pro/Con

Why?

1. It can protect people from vandalism

2. it would help avoiding crimes

3. is useful for police investigations

Thesis statement: Having surveillance by government in streets would have a lot of advantages such as the protection from vandalism, it would help avoiding crimes and it would be useful for police investigations.

 

Gun ownership

Pro/Con

Why?

1. It can create an irresponsible use

2. People would be scared

3. Society would need more regulation and rules

Thesis statement: Gun ownership would have a lot of disadvantages in society such as an irresponsible use, people would be more scared, and society would need more regulation and rules.

 

Globalization

Pro/Con

Why?

1. It would improve cultural knowledges in people

2. It would be useful to find a job abroad

3. It improves the international communication

Thesis statement: Thanks to globalisation, the world will have an improvement on international communications, it would be useful for people to find a job and, there would be an improve in cultural knowledges.

 

Changing your name

Pro/Con

Why?

1. Everyone has the right to be whoever they want

2. It would be a progress in society especially for trans people

3. You can start a new life

Thesis statement: Being able to change your name has a lot of advantages such as you can start a new life, it would be a progress in society especially for trans people and everyone has the right to be whoever they want.

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